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Review:Akussa says:
Wow, that was.. heavy. I feel the pain and horrors this boy went through, trying to get his father's approval although he was less than capable.

I really like that you went with this character; he isn't easy to work with. A simple boy really, one that wasn't really constructed as a human being. He was taught to follow and not think for himself and that is hard to write (for me at least). I always feel like I was to shake him and yell at him to grow up and become his own man and not just a sheep!

I think you really did him justice in the sense that no matter how badly his afterlife might turn out to be for him, he will rest and just accept that he, somewhat, deserves what is coming for him. I feel like you mean for him to understand that he wasn't a good human being.

The fact that he was alone was very powerful as well. Simply descriptive and introspective worked well for this character and is representative of his life. You followed your father's views, Voldemorts' Malfoy's. But you never made real connections.

Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks a million! I'm glad you liked it!

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