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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello! :) Aw, this was such a cute story! :)

"And you're going to be a godmother." One of my favourite parts of this story was the friendship with Alice and how much she means to Rose. Then naming the baby after her was just perfect! I especially liked this line as it was so matter-of-fact and showed how close they were - of course, there would be no question that she would be the godmother.

...she already loved this baby more than food and boy did she love her food. She had her father to thank for that. The Ron references here are just hilarious. I'm glad Rose is a girl who loves to eat, and how she compares her love for people to her love for food - I think we all have those moments, and she feels very relatable. I really like how sassy and sure of herself Rose is here, she's a lot of fun to read about.

Haha, what a way for Scorpius to find out about the baby! :P His reaction and their love showed more comfortable they are around one another. I also really liked the proposal in the snow, and how Scorpius was in his PJs.

Now that was a fun conversation. Oh no, poor Scorpius, having to face Ron's wrath. And poor Ron! I'm sure it took him a while to recover from that. :P But I loved the detail about history repeating itself with Scorpius fainting, and showing how perhaps Ron and Scorpius aren't as different as they think. It made me laugh as well how poor Rose had to cope with going into labour and waking up Scorpius - just a cute, silly little moment!

And the ending was just so adorable - what a perfect story for Valentines Day! This was a lovely little read and I really enjoyed it! :)

Gryffindor vs. Slytherin Blackout Battle, Round 2 - Review 5 of 15

Author's Response: Hey!

Thank you, fluff is something I love to write and so is ScoRose :D

Alice and Rose have been best friends since they were little so it seemed so fitting. That line and the very last one are my two favourites! There was definitely no doubt in the godmother at all or the baby's middle name.

I normally write Rose as slightly like Hermione, but I mean she has two parents! So of course she would get Ron's love of food. Everyone has those moments definitely!

He finds out in an totally unconventional way which I thought was more fun rather than Rose sitting him down and telling him. I think it was the perfect way and like you said his reaction was so sweet and their love is certainly strong! I think the proposal scene was my favourite, as he's doubting how well he knows Rose and then just does it our of the blue when she appears because he loves her and the moment was more perfect that it could have been if he had done it like he planned. As it was just the two of them in the moment and the snow just topped it off and so cute!

Poor Scorpius indeed! Having to face Ron's wrath, I like to think that he fainted as well at hearing the news his 'Rosie' was pregnant by non other than Scorpius :p He and Ron both love Rose and Rose loves them too, they may have their differences due to who Scorpius' dad is but they sure have similarities such as the fainting! Poor Rose indeed, she's about to have a baby and she has to deal with him fainting.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Good luck in the blackout battle, I'm being biased now but Go Gryffindor!

-Potterfan310



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