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Review:adluvshp says:
Blackout Battle!

First off, I loved how you used "Always" to signify James' love for Lily here.
It's usually only associated with Snape and people forget that James loved Lily too. So, I liked that.
The way you expressed James' thoughts and feelings for Lily in so few words and yet so well was also good.
It was interesting how he wanted Lily from the age of twelve and how that crush developed into such a strong love.
The part I loved most was the ending of course. How, even in death, James loved Lily.
It was sad how the green light of the spell also reminded James of the green of her eyes. It just showed how much he loved her.
The moment when he berates himself for not being able to protect Lily was also sweet.
The only "CC" I'd give is that in his dying moments, he should have berated himself for not being able to save their son too. After all, James would've loved both Lily and Harry by that time equally.

Nonetheless, this was good.
-AD
(AditiDraco95)

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