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Review:adluvshp says:
Blackout Battle!

Aw this was a nice little one-shot. It was a little sad to see how poor Dominique had to comfort herself with Teddy's words over and over that she was exceptional and beautiful and perfect and different.
I liked your portrayal of the next-gen Weasley/Potter clan. Most of it made sense and was believable.
I especially found it amusing how Albus was "revered" and him and Louis being in Slytherin was like them "forgiving" the house.
Oh and I also found it strange that Hufflepuff was the house of "you know what". Now that's something new, but I guess it's next-gen after all.
I enjoyed your writing style as well. It was like you were right in Dominique's had and penning her thoughts. The matter of fact way in which some things were stated and the continuos repetition of the mantra was a nice touch.
I could connect with Dominique and felt sad for her but at the same time cheered her on too.

Good job,

Author's Response: Hi :) Thank you for reviewing! I haven't been on here for so long, and decided to check how my account's doing. This was a happy surprise :)

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