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Review:adluvshp says:
Blackout Battle!

Hello. So I don't usually read Severus/Hermione stories and I didn't realise this was one until I started reading, but regardless, I liked it.
It was a cute fluffy little piece.
I liked your characterisation of little Serah and how she wanted to wait up and see Santa.
Your portrayal of Severus and Hermione was obviously very different from the books but it is a given since they're grown ups and married here.
It was amusing how Hermione still was using her beaded bag though, lol.
The ending made me giggle too. Poor couple, could barely get two and half hours of sleep.
All in all, this was an unusual but sweet little Christmas one-shot. I liked your writing and didn't notice any glaring errors.

Good work,
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! I'm a huge fan of Hermione/Severus so I'm pleased I was able to coax you into reading it :P Thank you!

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