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Review:adluvshp says:
Blackout Battle!

OMG this just broke my heart =( It was so, so heartbreaking and sad. But that's a good thing for your writing, so kudos!

I think you portrayed George's pain here very very realistically. I ached with him for Fred's loss while reading this. The "voice in his head" thing was also a nice touch. It was clear how much George missed him and it was interesting how he thought it was Fred telling him things inside his mind and how that sort of "fixed" him. I also liked how this wasn't entirely focused on George just reflecting but rather showed him to be aware of his surroundings too, like how his family was miserable because of the death and how they were concerned about George. It was bittersweet the way he slowly started "improving" and the ending was really fitting too.

I also loved your writing style as it made the pain all the more tangible. The descriptions painted the picture of how lost George's thoughts were. The over all narrative was very powerful and suited the mood of the plot.

I really loved this. Great job.

Author's Response: thankyou very much you have no idea how much this means to me!
great feedback, thankyou!

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