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Review:Iellwen says:
Hi Luluna!

I'm amazed again as I read your one-shot for the second time now... I smile and chuckle, frown and sneer... And the goosebumps! Don't get me started on the goosebumps I get during this read. I can't believe you wrote this in only a few hours! It's pure [Slytherin] genius!

Morfin is such a pathetic thing! I felt "Morfin soon forgets about the school. His days are repetitive and simple." described him so well, it was eerie!

I loved the short italic sentences, correspondence from the school the the Gaunt household.

The way you incorporate Merope, it's awesome; showing Morfin's ineptitude to comprehend the love she holds for the Muggle and maybe to comprehend love itself?

Morfin's obsession for snakes, their whispering... And his obsession with being Slytherin's heir... "Perhaps he is one of those poor souls who never merited a fate." This is were the goosebumps happen. Just before I finished reading this one-shot for the first time, I thought the (almost) exact same thing.

Staying credible, you managed to create something incredible. Amazing.

Thank you for writing this and many thanks for the read!

Go snakes!! :)

Author's Response: Hello! :)

Aw, thank you so much! I'm really happy you got goosebumps from reading it, that is rather how I felt when writing certain scenes. I had a lot of fun writing this, though it was very rushed, so I'm very pleased that you enjoyed it.

I know, poor Morfin. :( I actually felt really sorry for him and how pathetic his life was by the end of this. I'm pleased you liked the bits in italics as well and they seemed to fit.

Yes, Merope and Morfin are quite different! I imagined that in his way, Morfin does care about his sister, but he doesn't really understand love or care about it much. He loves himself, however.

I'm glad you liked the snakes, and being a Slytherin! Those two things were all he really had to be proud of. Ah, I liked that line as well. It really showed that his whole existence was quite pointless, which is sad in its own way.

Thank you for reading and reviewing, and I'm so happy you liked this! :) I really appreciate all your kind words! :D

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