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Review:nott theodore says:
Hi Sam!

I can't believe I haven't reviewed more of your stories before - I actually read all of Silver Linings before I started reviewing properly, and now I feel so bad! But I saw this on your AP and the summary was so cute that even though it's now March I couldn't resist reading it!

This was perfect, seriously! I've always loved your writing but this was just so cute and fluffy and perfect for Christmas (we're ignoring the current time of year now) and I have a massive grin all over my face after reading it. You captured Alexa and Albus brilliantly - of course, since you've written them for so long - but as children, which is even better!

I could picture this whole scene in my head, pouty, sulky Albus at the Christmas party suddenly finding himself under the mistletoe with a girl who he doesn't like that much, and then having to kiss her... I bet he never thought that he'd end up kissing her a lot more in the future!

You captured Albus so well, the whole narrative just felt so child-like (in the best way possible) and I loved the way that he seemed to stumble over words in his head and kept mentioning what other people in his family had said. It was so cute and definitely what little kids do, so it fitted really well and made me want to give him a hug.

Aw, Lexi and Albus ♥

I can't say much more about this, but it really is perfect and I loved it!

Sian :)

Blackout Bingo 6/15

Author's Response: Hey, Sian! Thank you so much for reviewing Albus/Lexi!. :D

Aww, that is so sweet of you to say, but you don't have to. Don't feel bad!

*Ignoring the current time of year* This idea was too adorable to not write. I had to show them as kids, before they liked each other. Like, they really don't like each other before Hogwarts (when they start school, they haven't seen each other in a long while).

Haha! No, he really doesn't see that Harry is right when he says "Give it time." This was a very bad moment in Al's life at the time. He won't think that later. :P

Albus is pretty much me and my little brother at that age, so writing him was more natural than others might have been. You can try and give him a hug. :P

Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Sam.


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