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Review:adluvshp says:
Blackout Battle!

Hey there! This was brilliantly written, my feels are all over the place right now =(

I loved your characterisation of Sirius and the portrayal of his relationship with Regulus. It was so sad that he had to leave and Regulus wouldn't go with him. I felt for both brothers deeply and wanted to cry (which is a good thing).

I also think your descriptions were beautiful and helped me connect with the story. Writing in second person is always hard and yet you pulled it off brilliantly. The entire story had a haunting feel about it and was so dark and sad, I was completely sucked into it.

All in all, great job!

Author's Response: Hi!

I'm positively thrilled by this review! I'm so happy that you liked my characterization of the brothers. Everyone seems to forget that although they were from warring houses they were first and foremost siblings. I'm glad that you felt for the brothers and trust me, I wanted to cry myself after finishing it!

Writing in second person is definitely harder than I expected and as this was my first attempt at it, it's awesome to know that I pulled it off! Thank you so much for this lovely review and sorry for the slightly delayed response!

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