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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hey again!

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This chapter was another mix of heartbreak and sadness. Your characterisation of Molly is perfect. You captured her fierce motherly love and caring nature and also got the guilt in there which I think is perfectly placed. Despite how evil Bella is, Molly is too good a person not to feel some guilt over it.

When she's thinking about each of her children in turn I thought you again captured the emotion so well. I will say though that Ron's was my favourite. Reading how much Molly cares about him and how she felt when he was away was completely understandable and relatable. My heart just broke for her...

Fred... I hardly have words to cover this. His death was by far the hardest for me to swallow and seeing both Molly and George's reaction to his death was devastating. I can't imagine what it's like to loose a sibling but to lose a twin, gosh. You did a very good job of dealing with such a sensitive subject so kudos to you!

The ending was that little bit of hope and brightness in a dark time so I'm glad you included it. Arthur and Molly completely understanding each other and seeing them together gives us hope that they have each other to get through this.

Amazing chapter, you got the characterisation spot on for this one! Well done!

Lauren :)

Review 5 of 10!

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