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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hi again!

Review battle review!

This was so much darker than the previous chapter, and rightly so with who it was!

I didn't feel comfortable reading this chapter at all so well done to your amazing writing! All the way through you kept reminding us of the cold and then when the buzzing kicked in too? That sounded so horrible! The whole thing though is so devoid of feeling, it was really chilling!

I liked the bit of Crabbe's character you showed, where he was pushing himself to be a death eater because of his fathers failure and trying to be in his fathers good graces. It was interesting to read!

The ending where he gets stuck with the faces of different people in his life is horrible, but as you said kind of deserved from the life he lead. I loved the stark difference you created from the first chapter... excellently done!

Again, I really enjoyed this chapter! Looking forward to the next one!

Lauren :)

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