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Review:lizzie says:
so this story has absolutely blown me away. I love every little thing about it--the parallels that you've drawn between your characters, the story line, hell, your word use is amazing. I especially love the parallel between Ginny and rose--Ginny is who rose could have become. the only thing I would comment on is who Harry became--it doesn't make sense to me. I understand PTSD and everything, and maybe he became obsessed with mastering the mind, I can see that. but I think there needs to be more of a back story there. include, somehow, what his job was, exactly, and that could make more sense to why he tortured Albus. I think it's a good aspect of the story--it shaped albus, for sure--but it needs more explanation. anyway, I'm very VERY eagerly awaiting the next chapter and really hope it comes quickly :)

Author's Response: Don't worry, i'm intentionally revealing as little as possible at the moment about Harry, because I want the readers to wonder like you are. (Notice we haven't had a single Harry flashback since chapter two?) It's been thought out for a very long time and is integral/MAIN to the tale (and extends waayy further than PTSD). Once the backstory is revealed, everything will make sense. I promise :)

His job (he was an auror, like canon) doesn't play a super massive role in everything because most of what happened was under the radar. Everything will be mentioned and revealed in as shocking as a manner as possible and I promise not to leave any loose ends.

Thanks for stopping by! I'll try to update as soon as I can!

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