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Review:800 words of heaven says:
Hello! I'm here reviewing for the Gryffindor/Slytherin Blackout Battle!

This story basically has everything that I love reading in fanfics, but never actually read for some reason: the Founders, challenge entries, and 500 words. So obviously, all of this combined just makes for a fantastic story that I couldn't resist :)

I really love this! It was short, but to the point, and I loved how it was written in second person. Stories in second person are rare, but they're just so wonderful to read. I find it difficult to write in this person, so I'm so impressed by the wonderful job you've done!

At first, I thought this was a one-shot but then I actually went and read the story info page and your AN and I am so happy that there are going to be four more installments to come! Yayayayay! More Founders musings! So much to look forward to.

I hope to be back soon :)

Author's Response: Wow!! This review was unexpected, and that made it all the more enjoyable!!

Yes, I like short chapters, too. They grab the attention, but you can read them quickly when there isn't much time for reading fanfiction. :) I am so glad that it caught your attention!

This was my first foray into second person, so it's nice to know that you thought I did well with it! I never knew how I would do with writing from this PoV, but I think that I really enjoy it!!

Nope, this isn't a one-shot at all!! I have four more chapters posted now, which means that it's complete! :D I do hope that you come back to read more!!

Thank you very much for your lovely review!!

~UnluckyStar57


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