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Review:LilyEPotter says:
Hi!

A very interesting beginning to the story. A dreaded sea serpent. I like how the Aged Stranger can admire the sea serpent after he saved the Muggles and how he wonders if the village has spoken with it. I just have to shake my head at how the village hadn't tried that option and hired someone to take care of it for them. *sigh* It does tend to be the usual response, unfortunately. Not only do I not like Peakes because of his attitude towards the sea serpent, his history is reprehensible and the ring reminds me of the ring that held the Resurrection Stone. Is Peakes a Gryffindor? If not, then how does he expect to find the sword? If he is, what noble deed will he do to be able to use the sword? Isn't that just like the Ministry to send a note about having used magic in the presence of Muggles even though he could use it because lives were in danger. *sigh*

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LEP:)

Author's Response: Hello! :)

I'm glad you found it interesting! I'm glad you liked his perspective on the serpent, and how he's worried about its welfare. You may have noticed that he doesn't like people that much and is quite sympathetic towards the creature!

Yes, it is quite frustrating at how the village was dealing with the problem! One would hope that if the story were in the present tense they would be a little more attentive in dealing with it.

Peakes is portrayed just horribly here. And hmm, interesting observation about the ring... :) He is a Gryffindor, though not the noblest one really.

It is just like the Ministry! :P Haha, the Ministry is really useless in this story, just as they were in Harry's time.

Thanks so much for the thoughtful review! :)


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