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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hi there!

Wow, this is so sad! I mean, generally marauder fics have a chance of that but this really gets to you.

I love your descriptions of how each marauder + Lily needed the group for the different reasons. I think you did a really good job of bring out the qualities of each of them in turn, whether it be good or bad.

The ending though. In the devastation of what happened I think it's easy to forget to see things from Lupins POV. He lost all three of his best friends and Lily that day. Literally everyone he loved and cared about and you really brought that home. The ending made me well up.

Also, I loved this line: "If we were four brothers, they were the twins." I think this is a great description of the marauders.

Great job on an awesome one-shot!


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Author's Response: Thank you so much for this lovely review! I almost never get them, and when I do they're rarely as long and as well-thought out as this one. I really appreciate it!

I guess I was feeling sad and decided to shove my feels on everyone else in fanfic form, hahaha. I definitely agree that people tend not to realize the loss Remus suffered, and prefer to focus on the Marauders when they were united and strong, rather than broken.

Once again, I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review!

~MN :D

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