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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hi there!

Wow. This is such an amazing entry and I can't believe you did this in just a few hours! You're amazing!

So the description you threw into this is just phenomenal. At every point in the story I had a clear image of what was happening so kudos to you!

I also loved (if that's the right word) your characterisation of Morfin. Obviously I don't like him as a character, but your version is perfectly fitting of what I expect of him! Right from the start when he got expelled from Hogwarts to talking to the snakes and then dying alone in Azkaban were all so well written.

You also did a great job of keeping the theme of Slytherin greatness running through this. Nearly every section had a reference to it, reminding us how strongly Morfin, and of course Marvolo believed it.

Also - great job on including the bit about Merope and Tom Riddle senior!

All in all this was really well written and I really enjoyed reading it! Great job!

Lauren :)

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Author's Response: Hi Lauren! :)

Thank you so much for giving me the first review on this! I wrote it so quickly and had no idea how it would be received, so this was extra lovely.

I'm glad you liked the description! It was quite fun, though a little sad, imagining how drab Morfin's world was. Haha, I'm glad you "loved" Morfin as well. :P I know what you mean, and it's nice to know you liked this version of him. I actually felt a little sorry for him, both in the books and when writing this. He really had no chance at a happy or fulfilling life.

Yes! For the Gaunts, being Slytherin was all they really had, and I wanted to show how Marvolo's obsession with it carried over to Morfin. I'm glad you liked Merope and Tom's appearances as well! For Morfin, that moment must have been quite critical.

Thanks so much for the amazing review, it really made my day! :)


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