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Review:LilyEPotter says:

Oh no, Harry's going to find himself in trouble again though I'm having a difficult time seeing his letter as being cold, short perhaps, but he is saying that he'll see her soon.

I can just see Ginny's face when she opens her door intending to leave only to discover one of her teammates standing right there. It now appears that Jessie may have been in on the plan to keep Ginny occupied while the Trio sets everything up in her room.

I think I would be worried about why my key wouldn't be working in the lock until after I hear a click and she has a very good reason to be standing in the hallway for awhile. I suppose the Trio must be wondering what's taking her so long to open the door though.

What a sweet ending! I also like how Ron declared that it was time to eat and I suspect it wasn't just to leave the room.

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Author's Response: Hi!

Harry might be in a lot of trouble; silly boy. Even when he plans things, it goes wrong. :)

Was she? Hmm? Haha, yes, she was. If I had kept the story going, you would have found out that Hermione called her. :)

She had a very good reason. I'd have stood out there for a while. No, I'm a Slytherin, I wouldn't have gone in at all. :P

Ron mostly didn't want to watch his best friend kiss his sister. :D

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