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Review:nott theodore says:
Hello! Wow, I don't think I've actually ever read a story about Dolores Umbridge and this was certainly an enlightening first, even if it is slightly scary to get a glimpse into the mind of such a terrifying and horrible woman (with all that pink!)

I think you did a good job getting a hold on her characterisation and giving us an insight into her mind and thought process. It was actually a little unnerving how well you managed to grasp her thoughts. Her hatred for children was very evident through this, even before the end of the story. Almost every word reeked of contempt of all the pupils at the school - there wasn't a single person who seemed to escape her scorn in this story, she criticised everyone in her thoughts! I don't know why anybody thought that it would be a good idea for Umbridge to become a teacher!

The part about half breeds was just awful (not badly written, well written but horrible to read about!). Her thoughts about poor old Hagrid and Flitwick were so mean but so true to her character, because she hated them so much and would practically have fitted in with the Death Eaters perfectly. I felt so sorry for them and all the other staff that she was thinking about here, because they really didn't deserve it. You did capture her thoughts about them brilliantly, though.

Haha, the part about the conspiracy theories made me laugh a lot because really she's the one who's paranoid, and, along with Fudge, would probably believe in any conspiracy theory that there is if her beloved Ministry was in threat.

Great job here!

Sian :)

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