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Review:Unwritten Curse says:
Here for the Blackout Battle. I just had to read this story after I saw the adorable title. And I'm glad I did! What a delightful read. Let me list the things I liked:

1. The kid language. The "claust-phobic" and "prob-ly" and the bit about Albus being glad he's a boy. So adorable and so accurate. This world is definitely being shown to us through a child's eyes.
2. Albus explaining his parents made me 'awww' out loud. That his dad reads to him and his mom makes him cakes. I found those details to be so sweet.
3. The ending! AH! And Albus finishing the scene by once again reaffirming that Lexi is a "big meanie" was such a fitting end.

One thing that slightly confused me was Albus calling Lexi's dad "Theo." Wouldn't he refer to him as Mr. Nott (I'm guessing that this is Theodore Nott)? Children don't usually refer to adults by their first name, but maybe this is just an Albus quirk.

Anyway, I really enjoyed this one-shot. Great work!

-- Gina

Author's Response: Hey!

I'm so glad you liked it, it's something I loved writing so much because Albus is basically me. It was so natural and easy.

Albus calls him Theo not Mr. Nott (yes, it's Theo Nott) because he's known Theo for a long time and Theo doesn't like Mr. Nott, too formal and reminds him of his dad, so Theo is all Albus knows him as. :)

Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Sam.


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