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Review:TheGirlOnFire says:
Hello, this is for the blackout bingo:)

Firstly, I'd like to say well done for another good chapter. The interactions between Narcissa and Lucius was nicely done. But I would have liked for us have read more about th through dialogue rather than narration. Narcissa dominating this and we can oonly make some assumptions on Lucius's character from the small pieces if dialogue he has.

Apart from that it was an enjoyable read.

TheGirlOnFirexx

Author's Response: Hey!

Lucius is basically a minor character in this story; everything is about Narcissa and what she sees. Lucius will come in more, though, I promise. :)

Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Sam.


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