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Review:A Worthy Gryffindor says:
I check every night before I go to sleep for a new chapter, and I nearly shouted when I saw that one had been uploaded!

I think it was hilarious that Ron's romantic gesture fell flat with Hermoine. To compare Ron's attempts at romance to 'an annoying bug' was so Hermoine :) I suppose I can understand why Ron is so hesitant to propose, as it's a scary prospect, and Ron gets scared quite easily! I hope his proposal is a surprise for Hermoine rather than expected - her reaction would be priceless!!!

I have always loved Fleur as a character, because she is such a strong, no-nonsense woman, and you write her perfectly! I do hope she has kept some of her dreams and ambitions still though - it's lovely that family is everything to her, but I hope she keeps that fire!

I especially liked the small section about Arthur at the end of this chapter. It was very understated, and was a lovely way to show the grief he was feeling. As though it was accepted, but still painful. He is a very selfless character and you show this beautifully.

This was a great linking chapter, and really showed how the characters have grown, and the people they have become. I have a feeling it is the quiet before the storm however - I look forward to more action! You say you find it difficult to write action, but from earlier chapters you have a real talent for it! I hope you have more confidence in yourself - it really adds colour to your already awesome story!

Geez this review was long! Glad you are settling in, and thanks again for uploading! It really brightens my day whenever there is a new chapter so thanks for writing and for reading my review!

Best wishes
A Worthy Gryffindor /***

Author's Response: Aw, that is great to hear :)

I'm so glad you liked that little part with Ron and Hermione. And yeah, I agree that Ron would freak out massively at the thought of such a commitment haha ;)

Thank you so much for saying that about Fleur. I really love her as well and I'm so happy you think I've done her justice. She'll definitely never lose her fire :)

I'm also very happy you pointed out that part with Arthur. You're right, it's a very small part but it did mean quite a lot and it's amazing to me that it stood out to you.

Thank you so much for all your kind words. I love getting such detailed reviews and I don't know how to thank you enough for taking time out of your day to write mine. You're brightening my day as well. Thank you!! xxx

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