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Review:BookDinosaur says:
Hello there! Here with your requested review from the forums. :D

It's been quite a while since I read this, and so I was really glad when I came back to it and was able to slip back into the whole story really easily, with all the characters and the plot, so yay for that.

I really enjoyed reading about Fred and George. I read your oneshot about them and the way you've written and characterised them was really perfect. The way that you branded them with the same mischievous humour and impulsiveness that we see in the books was perfect really. They weren't as exuberant as we've seen that they can be, but I think that makes perfect sene if you consider that they're in the middle of a war. The unicorn tail was a perfect touch, I think. :)

I really liked the way you wrote the mystery of Percy as well. According to all the accounts, he certainly is acting suspicious, and you're doing a great job of racheting up the suspense, so major kudos to you there, I really want to find out want happens next. O_O

Draco's section was absolutely fascinating as well! It was very interesting how he's been stalking/following/finding out about the Weasley family. The interaction between him and Voldemort was really realistic (well,as realistic as an interaction with Voldy can get). His reuniting with his family was really sweet, and I was rooting for him there.

All in all, I really liked this chapter and I'm really glad that I got the chance to read it. :D

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Something always seems to go wrong with the twins' experiments, doesn't it? :)

Percy does have an interesting secret that his family will discover. :)

Well... Voldemort had heard the truth about Draco, but Draco thankfully was able to offer a plausible explanation to his actions. :)

Thank you very much!
LEP:)


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