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Review:SilverDarkHorse says:
Well, here's a very late review :)

Engaging chapter, as usual. Hermione was brilliant - all eager to learn and discuss the magical world :) Harry is such a careless diddums - errrhhh... muggle-ish indeed :P Poor Sirius; he is one heck of a brilliant Auror, and his godson has to slip-up so!

Blaise appears to be holding his own rather well. Interestingly Slytherin characteristics, I would say. He and Draco seem to have a bit of common ground. I also think both of them would do well in Ravenclaw - they are observant, and their thought processes are very advanced for eleven-year-olds.

Overall, the sorting scene should be interesting - I am definitely looking forward to that!

Were Astoria and Draco the cannon couple you were referring to? I know you can't give anything away yet :P Just a rhetorical question :) I did see smacks of Harry/Ginny too, earlier on (when Harry keeps Ginny's drawing in his pocket during the Padfoot-trial scenario)...I am rather fond of the cannon couples, I hope you would consider them :) And I absolutely despise Draco/Hermione - it just seems so very wrong...

Crabbe eating soup with his fork - hahaha!! I am ashamed to admit I tried that out :P Didn't work out too badly :P

Of course, I missed Sirius and Remus very badly this chapter. However, even if you spend the next ten years writing ONLY about them, I would still ask for more :D !

I forgot to ask earlier, in the final chapter of Innocent, what is the dream that Sirius has? The one he "makes a conscious decision" not to tell Marlene about?

Spiffing chapter! I eagerly await to devour more-and more-and more... :)

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