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Review:Lostmyheart says:
Hi Penny!

I finally got the time to continue reading this AMAZING story. To be honest, I don't think amazing really covers it. This story is so much more than that.

I'm truly amazed by how you describe things. I know I've said it before, but you're so incredibly talented.

Most stories that has a conversation that stretches over several chapters can become dry. But you keep it interesting with these little flashbacks and you definitely keep the conversation between Draco and Astoria so intriguing.

I really like where this is going. And I especially like that Astoria decided to tell the truth to Ginny. It shows a more caring side of her - that she wants to avenge her mothers death and maybe wants to save innocent people's lives.

Love this story!

- Avi

Author's Response: Avi, I cannot even handle how sweet you are. You are THE BEST! I feel, like, showered with way more praise than I could ever deserve, but I really appreciate it. You know how when you have doubts about your work/the quality thereof, it's supposed to take like 7 nice thoughts to make up for 1 bad one? This is supposed to be a science thing. Anyway, next time the doubts/bad thoughts come around, I'm going to have to come back and read your reviews. I'm pretty sure a single review from you is as good as, or actually, probably better than, the requisite 7 good thoughts needed to outweigh the bad one.

I am so happy every time someone mentions that the flashbacks work for them! I was definitely concerned about that, but it was so vital to the story (since no one ever tells the truth, you kind of have to see it yourself). I'm delighted that apparently they're working smoothly and proving helpful.

Yes! Astoria, arguably, isn't as bad a person as she thinks she is (at least not all the time).

Thank you so much, again and again.

--Penny


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