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Review:lindslo2012 says:
Hi there!
Here for your requested review.. and let me say... WOW!
This was a very heartbreaking first chapter. But you made it feel so real. Like I was actually standing there watching the Wesley family go through this on Fred's funeral day.
Poor George. I can't even imagine what is going through his mind.. to be so close to your twin since birth, never separating and then bam! It was all taken away from you. :(
Though I feel bad for all the rest of the family too because this sucks very badly for them and everyone who was ever close to George.
Harry reacted just like I would expect him to and you got his and Ginny's characterization perfectly, as well as everyone else's. I am glad Harry came to comfort Ginny and revealed how he's feeling.
I see no grammar issues at all and your words and sentences flow very well! I think you and your beta did a fantastic job and I hope you re-request so I can come back for more. Your chapter was very interesting from the beginning and I want to see what the next one holds! :)
Until nxt time,

Author's Response: HI!
Thank you so much for such a sweet review! It made for such an awesome ending to my day :D
As sad as I'm sure it is to read, I really am glad that you can feel the grief the Weasley's went through. I tried really hard to convey the depth of it, so I'm so happy to hear that it came across strong.
Thanks so much for your comments on the characterization. I really do want to stay true to the way JK wrote them, so I'm glad it seemed that way to you :)
I will pass on the grammar and flow compliments to my beta :D I'm sure she will be happy!
I will most definitely be rerequsting :) I can't wait to hear what you think of the rest of it!
Thanks so so much, again!! *hugs*

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