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Review:BBWotter says:
OH MY GOD HIII!!! MY DARLING HOW I HAVE MISSED YOU SO!!! I can't wait for the party over the holidays :)) I love those special Freddie/Dorothy moments. James is just annoying to be honest with you. Like, I know he's trying to be sweet and all but just bleh. BUT I loved the line 'With every step she took away from him, he felt his heart ache more and more.' I might steal that one day ;)

That last bit just made me sigh like a lovesick fool. 'Freddie stepped behind Dorothy and wrapped both arms around her torso. "I know. Things are going to change, but not this. Not us."

Dorothy leaned her head back against his shoulder, letting her hands rest on his arms. She looked up at him and asked, "Promise?"

Freddie grinned, pressing his lips firmly against her temple. "I promise," he whispered into her skin. "You are mine." '

ALL DEM FEELS OMG ok I need to breathe. I've been waiting for so so long! :') Can't wait for the next chapter! You're amazing! xxx
Bochra xxx

Author's Response: Ha, I'm so glad you liked it! Sorry it took so long, college is EXHAUSTING. I'm glad that Freddie/Dorothy got dem feels exploding, and I'm sorry James is annoying...he's just a teenage boy in love, and those are mostly annoying. Hopefully you enjoy him more soon! I'm working through the next chapter currently, and GURL YOU SHOULD BE EXCITED FOR DA PARTAY CAUSE IT GUNNA GET CRAY. ;) But that's all I'm saying about THAT. Thanks so much for being such a loyal reader and reviewer!

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