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Review:SilverDarkHorse says:
I enjoyed the return of Moony and Padfoot - thank you for that! I missed them both far, far too much.

Nice to see Keira again. She is a lovely addition to the story. What news of Harry's scar? Did Sirius eventually speak to Dumbledore about it?

I like your impression of Hermione! I would love to see Hermione interacting with Ron - I have a feeling it would be very interesting :)

I would definitely accuse Brown of stupidity - what idiot calls Sirius a civilian *snort*. However I do agree that he is not unintelligent!

Very heartwarming when Moony introduces himself as "Patrick's" brother. He used his own second name too - nice :D And his "teacher" voice - haha, good practise for the coming year at Hogwarts.

Three cheers for Marlene! You've done a great job of showing her softer side. Haha trust Padfoot to be nervous :P Hoping to see lots more of their interaction soon!

Also, could we have some Padfoot-and-Moony teasing and banter, please? I mean real, substantial verbal banter. I guess Moony can do excellently in that department, and we haven't seen much of that from him.

I enjoyed the chapter as always, but this time, something seems a little...off. There were a few mistakes - HarryHarry in paragragh 6, Sirius and Hemsley instead of Sirius and Brown in Knockturn Alley, and a few dodgy punctuation marks. The tone of the chapter seems more hurried than usual. Only very subtle differences, but the overall impression is a wee bit off.

Sorry that this review is rather odd, and I didn't review last week's chapter yet; I'm just back in Adelaide after two days of air travel, and am very jetlagged and stiff.

Looking forward to next week's chapter. Cheers, mate! :D

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