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Review:Lostmyheart says:
Hi Penny!

I finally got the time to read the second chapter.
And I was not disappointed! It was incredible, truly amazing.

I can't get over how well written this story is. I loved how you portrayed them both. So formal and well-spoken, they both seem so smart and they almost play with each other somehow. They know exactly how to reply one another without beeing too honest, keeping it interesting all the time.

I'm kind of in love with this story already.
Can you fall in love with a story? Apparently, yes.

You're so talented!

Big hug
- Avi

Author's Response: Avi!

Sorry it's taken me a few days to respond. Urgh! I do mean to do better. It's midterms here, which is the only defense I can offer. Forgive me?

:D Ginormous smile. That is what you have done to my face. I am sooo glad you weren't disappointed. That's my constant worry with each chapter--I don't want anyone to read it and think, "Well, I've read better from her." Which, I mean, that's a silly fear and it's probably bound to happen sometime. But still, it makes me quite happy that chapter 2 didn't let you down.

You've got it just right, which I'm so excited about--they definitely play with each other. I think it's not often that either Draco or Astoria meets such a worthy opponent, and on some level they can't help but enjoy that.

Oh my gosh! Thank youuu!!! Avi, you really are the best encourager. I really appreciate it.

BIGGER hug ;)


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