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Review:alicia and anne says:
Hey there! I'm here to review you for TGS review pairing. :D

First of all I want to say that your descriptions are amazing! I could imagine it all being played out before me and it was so easy to picture Slughorn walking around his office.

I really love how he thought about the students that he had once admired and hoped would achieve greatness, only to have them turn out to be Death Eaters or killers.

The part where you talk about Millicent fighting against the Death Eaters made me happy that some Slytherins aren't like the others he had previously.

The ending was really amazing, the fact that he wouldn't give up on future students and would help them achieve greatness showed that he was a great man.

This was such a well written one shot and I really enjoyed reading it, it was perfect.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for stopping by!

I'm glad you liked the description here and enjoyed seeing Slughorn reflect on past generations of students. I definitely wanted to show that not all Slytherins were evil or became Death Eaters, and Slughorn's algorithm for predicting success isn't flawless, far from it. Of course, I wanted to throw in that happy ending, to show that Slughorn can still impact others for good.

Thanks for your lovely review!

-Amanda


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