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Review:keyty says:
Hello there! A very late requested review. Sorry for the delay.. but I'm here now!
I really like this. You have some solid writing and your pacing is spot on. I didn't feel too rushed or bored with any of the scenes, and you definitely left me wanting more! I also think you write Remus very well. And I like that instead of saying he's single because of his lycanthropy you attribute it to his love for Marianne. That's a nice little twist I haven't seen before. Overall I think the plot moves very well, and I don't think it's too information heavy! You're in the beginning stages so it's natural to have to fill the reader in on what's going on.
Anyway, I enjoyed this very much! Can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: Hi, hi! Sorry for the late reply, work/the weekend took up all my time.

I'm glad this chapter isn't too information heavy because I wanted to lay the groundwork for Remus' actions in the future. I wanted his relationship with Marianne to mirror his relationship with Tonks with very subtle similarities ... so for instance, I made him love her from afar for 2 years but he never tries to date her because he feels guilty about his disease. I've made the parallels stronger as the story progresses, but again, it's good to know the pacing is normal and not too much to handle.

I always debate adding more to this chapter because it's the shortest one of the series, but I think I'll leave it as it is if you didn't feel rushed or bored. That's just what I wanted to hear!

Thanks for the review keyty, I appreciate it a lot!!


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