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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hello! I've just come from Polyjuice_'s story!

Not going to lie, I did get some goosebumps!

The way you wrote Bellatrix was really good! In the beginning, it sounded like there was a bit of humour and I was confused because I thought this was the creepy version but then as I read on I got more and more creeped out :p

But that's a good thing, ahaha!

I really loved your portrayal of Bellatrix - I can't seem to say anything else because I'm so awed by the way you wrote her. She's just glorious.

Anyway, great job! And I loved the way your stories connected! It was really interesting!


- Kayla :)

Author's Response: Hello! :)

Ah, I'm glad! Goosebumps are a good thing.

I actually had a lot of trouble balancing the humour and creepiness in some spots, partly since I'd just read Liz's story and was giggling from it, and because it's hard to take Bella's crazy seriously sometimes. :P I'm glad you found it creepy by the end, though!

I'm really happy to hear you liked the way I wrote Bellatrix! I was a little nervous I wouldn't do her justice but she was fun.

Thanks so much for the lovely review! It's really great of you to come by, and I appreciate all your kind words. :)

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