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Review:800 words of heaven says:

I was going to review your speed dating entry, since it is my current goal to review them all, but it felt like cheating using review tag to do that. Also, this story had no reviews, and I'm a sucker for Marauders fics.

I really liked this look at Lily. I get really annoyed at characters who are so self-sacrificing, and those were my feelings towards Lily at the beginning of this fic. However, as the story progressed, I started to see her side of the story. That conversation with James when she was eighteen was HEARTBREAKING. I had actual tears in my eyes - great use of foreshadowing by the way. Totally heart-pulled-out-of-chest-I'm-dying but also totally awesome :)

And as always, there was that completely and utterly gut-wrenching moment which are Lily's last moments. That one last touch with her son was a beautiful moment and had me clutching my computer screen because of all the feels.

Awesome stuff! Please excuse me while I go wail about the unfairness that is Lily and James Potter's deaths.

Author's Response: HELLO!

Yeah, I usually get annoyed at those types of characters but this little bugger was stuck in my head and didn't go away until I wrote it :p But I quite liked writing this piece!

When I was writing it I was like WHY AM I DOING THIS TO MYSELF FHJERHRBFKJFNJ?! Hahaha!

Thank you so much for this absolutely amazing review! I'm so sorry about the delay in the response!

- Kayla :)

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