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Review:Maelody says:
This was absolutely amazing! There is something special and unique about a story that can use little to no dialog. The emotions, the description, and the story flow more beautifully because of it, and it helps readers realize that it's not always what you say, but what you do.

I love how he pines over her. You make it very crush-like and steer clear from it seeming stalkerish it creepy. It's gentle and sweet. The anonymity of his entry makes it even better. Though it was really sad that we don't see her answer in this, because I would love to know the emotions that flow through him when she answers.

It's also pretty refreshing to see a Scorpius view in a Sco/Rose story. How humble he is, how he feels for her, and how he was raised. Very nice!

You wrote this so wonderfully, and I think this idea was absolutely remarkable. So imaginitive and descriptive, it was visually very beautiful! Kudos to you and your partner for being awesome!

I'm going to check out the other half now. I'm dying to know Rose's answer! :D Best of luck to you two!

~Mae

Author's Response: Maelody,

Awe, thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked this one with almost no dialogue. It is interesting that you mention it. I've actually written a 'no dialogue' story called "When a Wizard Grieves," so I suppose that was great practice. You are right that it is not always what you say, but what you do. :)

His feelings are definitely crush-like, as you mention. I'm so glad it wasn't creepy, though. I didn't want it to seem like that... just a much more innocent level.

Yes, this story seems sad, but you will get Rose's and his reaction in the companion story. He's pretty nervous, I can tell you that! ;)

I haven't read much Sco/Rose (not enough time to read everything I would like to), so I don't really know what is currently out there. So, thank you for saying that it is refreshing. :D

With as much as Draco went through the war, my head-canon thinks he would teach his son to appreciate things and be a little more humble in the face of reality and what is important in life.

Awe, thank you for your many compliments! I'm glad you enjoyed the ice sculpture scenery and the glow at night. Thank you!

Oh, I do hope you enjoy Rose's point of view and her answer. It was really fun bouncing ideas off my Speed Dating partner. It was exciting!

Thanks so much for your wonderful review. Much appreciated!

Sincerely,
Dark Whisper



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