Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Lululuna says:
Hello! :)

Aw, I loved this so much! It's both tragic and romantic, and you wrote it so beautifully.

I really like the idea of Lavender being disturbed and depressed after the battle. I mean, having a man biting your face would be terrifying, and having to see a physical reminder every time she looks in the mirror would inevitably bring that back. It feels very tangible and true.

I also liked the comparisons between how Lavender used to be and how she sees herself now. It's interesting to see her reflect on the way she acted around Ron. I also like the explanation for why she was so clingy, because she was trying to deny the fact that she might have feelings for girls instead, and act like all the other girls did and how she felt she was supposed to be. The hints that she might have had a crush on Parvati was a great reminder as well.

I love Juno! She just seems like such a loving and down-to-earth person who is just the right girl to help Lavender learn to feel good about herself. I loved all their interactions and how she was clearly a source of calm for Lavender, how looking at Juno's picture calmed her. It was just lovely.

This was a beautiful story, and I'm off to read your partner's story now! :) Amazing job! :D

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 538
Submit Report: