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Review:Lululuna says:
Hi again! :)

Yay, another chapter of Max! I was really excited for this.

Also, sidebar, I love how you've specified that wench is not a negative term but typical use for a young lady! I read a late Victorian book where they kept calling the girl "wench" and I was shocked by it but apparently it's a thing, hehe.

Ivan's womanizing ways made me laugh, especially how she was so intrigued to hear tell of a maiden. She's so sneaky, though it really doesn't seem fair that she can't have proper relationships with the maidens due to her predicament.

Hehe, the poor Xtras, not even important! However I think Max named them very nicely. You do make me giggle.

"Smelled like privy" hahaha gross, but most likely very true. Somehow this often gets skirted over in historical romances so I'm glad you brought it to attention. :P

Sir Marty Stu!!! Oh, thank Merlin it isn't really him. This Roderick (such a good Gryffindor name) seems interesting, however. Especially since he resembles that ginger guy who got killed off really unexpectedly in the Tudors.

Magically enhanced gold armour sounds reasonable.

Ivan! :O How inapproapriate. :P But I mean, she does have to blend in well with the men, and doubtlessly they would be full of vulgar insults. I like her arguments with Max as well, and don't blame the others for being confused.

I'm so excited for Ivan's adventure! How perfect that she be going to rescue Helena from the Baron, I like the little canon tweaking here. I also enjoyed the comment of the bravest man ever to exist in existence. Indeed it's a bit of an odd defining characteristic.

Hilarious chapter, I loved it! :D I'll be keeping an eye out for the next one!

Author's Response: Hello again!

Heh, I think that a bad mark has been put on the word "wench" ;), though, I'm pretty sure that's it's used negatively as well. I think it has to do with context or something...I don't know.

Ha, Ivan does think like a man at times...hence the womanizing ;). Maybe she'll fall in love one day and be able to be with a maiden...or something.

I was hoping everybody would catch the Xtras. They were kind of obvious, but, you never know.

Privy's can be romantic... okay, no they can't.

I have no idea what I was thinking with Marty Stu...I think I was doing things for my own amusement ;). It was all Max. Sir Roderick! :D That IS the guys from the Tudors, and I love that show!

Magically enhanced gold armor was reasonable enough for me.

Ha, Ivan has a potty mouth, but she does blend well!

The adventure is coming!

Thanks so much! ♥

-Rumpel


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