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Review:Hogwarts27 says:
Wow, what a chapter. Exciting from start to finish. I absolutely loved it. It kept me on the edge of my seat.

This story was close enough to cannon so that everything felt familiar, but you changed it enough to keep things unpredictable. Great use of the Marauder's Map. I was nervous when Bellatrix and Voldemort were both in the Great Hall. I wondered who Bellatrix would kill this time - and who would end up killing her, if anyone. And Voldemort - that scene was terrific. I loved the magic, and the way Harry killed him. It really took me by surprise and it was great.

Another wonderful thing about this story is that while we feel sorry for every new casualty, we also feel happy for other characters who died in the books but who get to survive here.

This was wonderful story, and it also had a great ending. It was truly a delight to read. Once I was a few chapters into the story, I was waiting for every chapter. The writing was fantastic, the action was exciting, and the characters were always in character - perfectly. Congratulations on finishing this - I'm sure you're celebrating - and I do hope you'll write more. Thank you so much for writing this story, seeing it to the very end, and posting it for us to enjoy. I'm on my feet cheering!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your wonderful reviews. I appreciate each and everyone of them.

About Voldemort, I wanted Harry to kill him in a way that hasn't been used before - at least I have never seen it before. Also because I couldn't really see Harry using the Killing Curse. Of course he wouldn't hesitate to use it in order to save someone, but I didn't think he would be able to kill someone in cold blood, even if that someone is Voldemort. I also wanted Voldemort to die by non-magical means and I kind of liked the idea of Slytherin's heir being killed with Gryffindor's sword.

There are less deaths of main characters in my stories than there were in the books, simply because I liked the characters too much. Killing off Remus and Tonks for example, was simply out of the question.

Thanks a lot for your nice comments. It is great to hear that you liked the stories so much. And thanks again for reviewing every chapter from both 'What If' and 'This Is The End'. It truly meant a lot to me.

Teddy


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