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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
Goodness there's much to do, and much to read! I figured that since I haven't caught you in a while, I should probably come and finish FotT!

Hooray! She marries Trip!

It makes sense that Ravenclaw would be against marriage. She's looking at everything logically and rationally, just as I would expect her to. I really feel sorry for Helena, though. It's really no wonder why she stole the diadem, if she believed it would make her more intelligent. That way, maybe she would have worth in her mother's eyes.

Stephane was permanently marked by his actions in Hamlin, though he was really had the best intentions. I do feel bad for him, too.

You've really done a fantastic job at tying up the story and making way for different family lineages. Also, I love the origins of what will be the shrieking shack.

Oh, and there's a little twist at the end :D.

This was really just fantastic! I loved it~!!

-Rumpel

Author's Response: Hello! :)

Yay! Great to see you back here.

I'm glad you liked Trip and Marigold getting married. Of course there was that little catch... but I think they had a long and happy life together.

Yes! Rowena here is very cold and rational and she likes to be unconventional. I'm glad you feel sorry for Helena as well, she's been neglected and pushed aside by her mother who doesn't really know how to love her. I felt quite sad writing about her.

Poor Stephane - he's so young and impresisonable, and he does take a lot of the blame. I like your way of saying it here - he had good intentions, but he is marked by it.

I'm glad you liked al the family histories and lines! The shrieking shack story was one of the first things I thought of with this and it was so exciting to finally reveal it. :)

Hehe, I'm glad you liked the twist! :D

Thanks so much for your thoughtful reviews on this story and for leaving me so much wonderful feedback! I really appreciate it! :)


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