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Review:water_lily43175 says:
Oh, Neville. He TOTALLY knew what he was doing there, didn't he? He knows countless Weasleys who could babysit for a start, not to mention the rest of his acquaintances, but he asks Blackburn. Yeah, go Neville. :)

Poor Albus, he's so unconfident! Not surprising given who his parents are, especially given James made his Quidditch team which just adds MORE pressure on him. Hopefully he'll make the team and he'll feel more confident in future. :)

Bleurgh nasty Slyths! Leave Remus' face alone!

Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted to give Neville a chance to come full circle and to do more or less what Remus did for him by asking him to tackle the boggart after Snape humiliated him or the fake Moody did by telling him how Professor Sprout said he was brilliant at Herbology. And if anybody knows how it feels to be humiliated and in need of something to give you confidence, it's Neville.

And yeah, Albus has a lot of pressure on him and it's probably only going to be worse for Lily (hints at what I have planned for year 3 which isn't much because I'm still totally confused about how events are going to play out).

Imagine how SL would react to that part about them hexing Remus's memorial if she ever reads this. I think I commented at the time that she REALLY wouldn't like part of this story.

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