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Review:nott theodore says:
Hi Taylor!

This was brilliant, I loved reading it! I've just come from reading the companion piece to this and now I can say that I'm really impressed with the idea that you two came up with and how well you worked together on these stories, because it's really clear when you read them both. The idea of doing a generational story is great, but then there were a few little motifs that were in the first story that reappeared here, almost making it seem like they'd been written by the same author. The heart was obviously one of them, but there were also little details like what Scorpius's first words were, so similar to Draco's. That attention to detail was brilliant.

I liked the fact that, although these stories were the parents and then their son, the romances didn't follow the same patterns, there were just some similarities. The unconventionality of Draco and Astoria's relationship was a nice change, especially since most stories about pureblood characters seem to make a big deal about the fact they do everything properly, and Astoria was refreshing and down-to-earth, rather than just a copy of Narcissa. I liked the flip in perspectives as well, with the first being told from the woman's and the second being told from the man's.

Draco's nervousness about proposing was really sweet and quite endearing. I have to admit, I'd have been saying the same as Astoria if he'd waited that long, since they have a child and everything :P There were some really lovely descriptions here too, well done!

Sian :)

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