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Review:megthechef43 says:
Dark,

I'm going to guess Salazar Slytherin.

I like the beginning of the chapter and that you let us have Harry's thoughts on Hermione and how his feelings were growing for her but that didn't mean that he didn't love Ginny. It is also and interesting point of view that I have never explored that Harry might feeling pressured into a relationship with Ginny because of her feelings and Ron. I don't want Hermione's hope in Draco to be dying. My heart is breaking because they are both losing hope in their love for each other and I want them to be together. I want them to have the joyful reunion that the Prince had with his Delilah.

You are not boring me with the Delilah story. The title of your story is Delilah's Black Book of Poems, so Delilah's story should be a good part of your story. I really want to know what is going to happen between the Prince and Delilah. I don't want it to be a tragedy because the story is so closely tied to Draco and Hermione's situation. Hermione is in great danger and sending her light to her love and Draco is stuck in the house of Evil, forbidden to love Hermione and worried about her every minute of every day. Gosh, i so want that happy reunion! :)

I think Harry and Hermione having a small "mistake" fling during their time alone. I think Harry and Hermione always were that almost couple that should have been if Ron, the war, and Ginny hadn't been in the way. I wish Draco didn't have to see that though because he is already having a hard time not slipping completely into the darkness. I want Draco to be good.

Lol, are you sick of hearing about what I want yet??

I can't wait to read more, this is an ABSOLUTELY AMAZING chapter and story. Great job!

Until next time...

Meg

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