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Review:megthechef43 says:
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Wow, this story gets better and better with each chapter. The depth of emotions is so amazing.

I'm glad the Prince got to see Delilah again and sneek a small kiss from her. I can totally see the connect between Draco and the Prince when the Prince mentions the world had formed him but Delilah changes him. I think Draco could say the same thing exactly to Hermione. I hope they didn't get caught again. I can't wait to read more on what HErmione is going through.

I think the transition between the last chapter and now being Christmas was seamless. It mirrors the fact that much has happened since the last chapter and yet everything has stayed the same as Draco is suck in the Manor and Hermione is on her adventure.

I bet Draco was completely thrown off by Lord Voldemort's "generosity" and giving Draco a gift for Christmas. I think it is completely within reason that Lord Voldemort trusts no one and I like that you have added that element to your story that even though he is favoring Draco that he doesn't trust him. I wonder what Lord Voldemort thought when Draco mentioned that he wanted to see these things before he dies.

The Abbey scene was beautiful and i love how it tied in with the beginning of the story and Charles *ickens. I hope Scabior doesn't report back to Lord Voldemort that Draco is dangerous. I love the scene from the snatchers point of view and see the remorseful death eater. It wsa a beautiful scene to read. I think the journey was meaningful to Draco because he feels that it will bring him closer to Hermione in some way but I like that the actions Draco took were not missed by his escorts and that it even had one of the Snatchers rethinking his job title. I think you provided an interesting view on the snatchers through Scabior and his thought on his job.

Lord Voldemort is one sick and twisted person. I'm not sure why he would think Draco would take part in the humiliation of Luna. I like that Draco was mad that he had to use force to subdue Luna. I think it only adds to the pain draco feels for his actions. It was a sweet moment when he was having issues with what Hermione might think of him and how he treated Luna. He is always thinking of her.

Another amazing chapter!

Until next time.

Meg

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