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Review:megthechef43 says:
Dark,

I am sad I have been away so long because this is an amazing chapter. I loved the whole thing from Hermione and her story to the explaination for Draco's thoughts and beliefs. It was interesting to read Draco's point of view on faith.

I felt so bad for Draco when you mentioned the whiskey being a horrible gift for Draco if his father knew him at all. I don't think his father wants to know him, his father wants him to be a drone. That is sad that he is a borderline alcoholic already.

I really like the scene you described about the shattering hourglass and the meaning it held for Draco.

I'm glad that you are still showing Hermione's contection to Draco and that her feelings are still strong despite everything that has happened between them. It is great that she preserved the the flower to look at it each day and that she is reading the book each night to feel closer to him .

I like your intermingling of stories with the Prince/Delilah and Draco/Hermione. The young and forbidden love is so tragic and while I', not sure what will happen with Delilah and her prince I hope Draco and Hermione can find their "Happily Ever After" and his dream doesn't come true.

I hope that Draco's downward slide into the darkness isn't permenant. I like that he isn't all good but his isn't evil either. The point of view that shows us how tempting the Dark Arts and power can be. I love that Hermione is his one saving grace to his downward thoughts. I hope he doesn't always think of love as a Terminal Illness. I like that her light from reading the book her gave her is pulling him through his dark time. I think his conservsation with his mother was a good element to the story. I wonder if his mother ever puts two and two together. The like he thinks he is going crazy because of the green book.

I was wondering if the book ever becomes dangerous becuase of it's legend? I don't want anything bad to happen but I know the book had to be listed as dangerous for a reason.

Another amazing chapter! 10/10

Until next time...

Meg

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