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Review:HeyMrsPotter says:
Kayla! Long time no speak, fellow badger! I hope you're well :)

I just came from reading Kinnu's part of your entry and I really liked it. I love how original your idea is, having Hermione be the link between the stories. I'm a huge dramione fan but my favourite canon pairing is Ron/Hermione so yours and Kinnu's entry was one I was really looking forward to. (Neither of you disappointed :D)

I just adore the pair in this story. The way they talk about the war, and their lives after it is just so natural and I actually found myself being really frustrated that they had let each other go for an entire year. Do they not know they're supposed to be together?! Phew, calming down now I swear!

Also, can we just talk about this:
They werenít doing it with the weight of the fact that they might die in a few hours over their heads. Instead of shattering rocks, shouting, and curses bouncing all over the walls, they heard a distant bird flapping its wings and the slight chatter from the pubs inside.
Literally the perfect kiss! Love the comparison to their first one :)

Superb job on this Kayla, I loved it.

Dee :)

Author's Response: Dee! I know, I've been rather busy at the moment, which sucks!

Sorry about the delay in the response! I didn't realise it had been over two weeks! D:

Kinnu's story was just fabulous. I really don't like Dramione that much but she wrote it so fantastically and I'm so glad I was partnered with her!

hahaha, I'm so glad you liked it! You review really made me smile! :D

I also loved that sentence! When I wrote it I just stared at it in awe for a while, haha! I'm quite proud of that little tid-bit :p

Thank you for the beautiful review. You're the sweetest! ♥

- Kayla :)


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