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Review:HeyMrsPotter says:
Hello, Lo (Sorry, couldn't resist :D) I'm on a spree reviewing all of the speed dating entries :)

This is the first story I've read about Lavender post-war (in which she doesn't snog Ron behind Hermione's back and become a catalyst for Dramione, but I digress!) I think you've captured her personality really well, not changing the girl we know from the books but building upon that to make her more interesting and less two dimensional. The way you have her reflect on her life as a result of the ordeal she went through in the battle of Hogwarts is really well done, this line in particular was great:
But all I remember is a horrible night, cut through by flashes of green and the crazed screams of those who fell.

I think you eased into her being with a girl really effortlessly and I like that you hinted that it was a result of her scars that she finally accepted her sexuality. It makes total sense, whilst she still had her looks she had a front to keep up with, be beautiful and like boys and have a boyfriend, it's what she thought was expected of her. I like the subtle irony in the fact that her looks had to be spoiled in order for her to be true to herself.

Juno seems like a really fascinating OC and definitely seems good for Lavander, the fact that she is so understanding of Lavanders feelings about her scars speaks volumes, it shows just how much she loves her.

There was a really nice balance of angst and romance in this story, and I'm really looking forward to reading your partner's side to your entry and learning a little more about Juno.

Brilliantly original idea, and a great read!

Dee :)

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