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Review:megthechef43 says:
Hey DarkWhisper,

You have done it again, written another amazing piece.

I love how you revealed the link between Rose and scarf in first line. When you describe the scarf I can feel the tender emotions that Scorpius has for the owner by his description and his attention to the detail of the scarf.

I totally get the Slytherin self-preservation you mentioned about Scorpius. It is sad how much he feels for her but because of how he was raised he can't just tell her. It is sad.

I'm glad Scorpius found a way to tell her how he felt and how his whole reason was to make her smile because she had been sad. I like the link between an old love for ice craving and his new love Rose. You did an amazing job in linking the whole story from his choice of a Dragon and in particuliar the type of dragon and how the dragon protects. It was an "awe" moment when he revealed his treasure is Rose. It is so sweet.

I can't believe she didn't smile. That is so disappointing for Scorpius and I felt so bad for him after that. I'm so glad she came back and I'm going to go read the companion piece right now to find out how she feels.

Thank you for writing this wonderful piece. (BTW.. I noticed I have much Deliah to catch up on.)

Until next time...

Meg

Author's Response: Awe, thank you, Meg!
You are so kind and supportive.

You totally picked up the scarf from the first line! Thank you for that. I wanted it to be the picture that he sees of her that will become important later. This pretty scarf... that he knows immediately that it belongs to Rose. Thank you for mentioning it. :)

On Slytherin self-preservation... I think many can relate to really liking someone from a distance and never saying anything. Fear of rejection can be debilitating. :(

I'm so glad you liked the story line and Scorpius' choice of the dragon. :) And yes, he wants to protect her. Sweet, indeed.

Yep, she frowned. Of course this only added to his heartbreak... you know I love to write sad things. :P Hahaha! The happy parts are in the companion story. LOL! XD

You are such a dear. Thank you for leaving this wonderful review and for catching up on Delilah. Who knows when I will be able to respond to all of them. I'm so far behind!

Anyway... I'm so glad to see that you have returned. Welcome back, my friend. :)

Dark Whisper







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