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Review:HeyMrsPotter says:
Hey! I just came from reading Rumpel's half of your entry and thoroughly enjoyed it, as I did with yours!

As with Rumpel's, I adored the use of the archaic language, it made the story feel so real. Your description is really lovely too, I particularly liked your opening chapter about the Muggles seeing flashes of spells from the castle.

Rowena's character is superb, I like that she is a bit rebellious and doesn't always behave like a lady should. The reference to her wearing the diadem was a nice touch too.

What I loved most about yours and Rumpel's entry was the continuation between the two, the language and writing style were so similar they could have been written by one person, the use of the similar lines to end with and the fact that both Salazar and Rowena both had misconceptions of each other from what they had heard.

Excellent one-shot, consider me a fan of RumpelStar57!

Dee :)

Author's Response: Hello! I am so sorry that I haven't responded to your review until now!!

Thank you so very much for reading and enjoying my story!! :)

I particularly love archaic language, so writing a Founders era was a good excuse to use those old phrases and words. Awww, thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked my descriptions.

I wanted Ravenclaw to be a feministic character before feminists were cool (so, like a hipster, I guess!). She definitely doesn't want to be told what she can and can't do! And in the name of wisdom, the diadem is on her head most of the time.

I really loved working with Rumpel because it was so easy to match up our writing styles! She actually wrote her chapter first, so I tried to mimic the things that she was doing in it, while staying true to my own voice at the same time. And we sort of hybridized the ending, so that some of the things in my chapter ended up in hers and vice versa. The Speed Dating Challenge was an awesome thing to participate in!

Thank you so very much! I too am a fan of RumpelStar57. :)

~UnluckyStar57


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