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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey there! Thank you so much for entering the Uncomfortable Challenge!

Aw, this was a really nice, sweet story! It was so easy and light to read - I really enjoyed it!

I've always found Lucius and Narcissa to be an interesting couple, but have never really read a lot about them - I think you did an excellent job with the prompt, giving us insight into their relationship. I loved the little details you included like the space in the bed and the one fact per meal.

The thing I loved most of all about this piece was how they came together after Draco was born. My only criticism is that I want to read more! This was a great read!


Author's Response: Hello! I'm so sorry about the delay in this response! D:

I'm glad you liked it! I wrote so many versions (with only one paragraph) and kept deleting them all because it just wasn't working but thankfully I found one that did! :p

Haha, when I read the 'my only criticism' I thought, "Hmm... I think it's going to be about the characterisations as I was still a bit iffy about it" but then I continued to read more and laughed, haha! Sorry but I don't think there's going to be any more! ;)

Thanks for posting such an excellent challenge! I really loved doing it!

- Kayla :)

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