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Review:Olivia says:
Hi,

This is my first time reviewing a story but I loved your storyline so I felt obliged too. I hope you don't take my constructive criticism too badly!
First of all, I felt like their feelings were - how should I put it? - too easily portrayed perhaps. Their emotions towards eachother, in my opinion, could have been less forced I guess? I just felt like it was too easy, if you get what I mean. I think that you could have added something to prove Draco actually caring for Hermione in the reunion scene apart from the flirting. However, I love your writing style and plot. The drama was interesting yet again I felt it was a little too easy. Personally, I think you could have added more setbacks and doubts but I loved the story overall. Other than that and a few grammar mistakes (e.g. commas needed in places) I think you did marvellously for a first story! Well written and I hope you write many more great stories. Thanks :)

- Olivia

Author's Response: Hi Olivia,
Thanks so much for the lovely review and I feel honored the be the first person you chose to review for! I agree this story needs some work. It was my very first ever fanfic and I now have seven more:) I have got a lot better at writing since this story but I plan to come back and correct some of my errors when I have time;) thanks so much once again!!!
-Lindsey


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