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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here for review tag!

So, this was absolutely hilarious! I loved your plot concept - Neville's encounter with a Muggle and the muggle wondering what on earth Neville was talking about. It was amusing to read his thoughts on how he felt Neville was kinda off his rocker and it made me smile.

I also enjoyed Neville's story, of how he was travelling the world but was, ahem, being "ran all over" by girls because of being a hero after beheading Nagini. It sounds believable and I can imagine Neville not liking it too much.

I absolutely enjoyed Luna's entry towards the end - you managed to keep her completely in character too! The best part of the fic was Ric's bewilderment of course which your narrative followed so smoothly.

I especially liked the ending too - of how everything went back to normal without Rick remembering anything and the way it ended similarly to the beginning.

All in all, this was a very good read and I really liked it. Great job!

10/10
Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hi!

This was a lot of fun to write and it came together in about 4 hours time, so I'm really glad that you liked it.

Poor Neville never expected that being a hero was going to be so difficult. Nor did he expect traveling with Luna to be such an, er, exhausting experience. So when she manages to track him down, he's legitimately scared.

I modeled Rick after several of my uncles. Sort of an amiable if not exactly open-minded fellow.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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