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Review:HeyMrsPotter says:
Hello, I'm on a mission to review all of the speed dating entries and your story is next on my list :)

This is the first time I've read a Regulus/anyone fic and Barty jnr is the last person I'd put him with but after reading your story I can totally see it. I love how sensitively you handled the obvious predjudices from the high society wizard types and find it really believable that a relationship between Barty and Regulus would have been frowned upon.

I really liked how well you portrayed Regulus' heartbreak at the idea of Barty being with a girl, all the while telling the reader that Regulus knows they could never be together properly anyway.

Their kiss scene was completely perfect, there was a great sense of passion and forbidden love in it and fit their non-relationsip really well.

I also loved the repeated use of the wouldn't shouldn't couldn't throughout, again reinforcing the idea that their love was forbidden.

Looking forward to reading your partners story to go with this, good job!

Author's Response: Hey there - thanks so much for stopping by! I'm amazed by you reviewing all the entries - congratulations and good luck! It's mindblowing...

Yeah, it's not a main or popular pairing, but honestly, I really like them together. I think they complement each other well, but that might just be me. Unfortunately, yeah, I can't see a relationship between them being celebrated, you know? It's incredibly sad...

Thanks! :) I'm glad you liked it - I wanted to play a lot on the 'hope' aspect of it, and more the potential, rather than anything else.

Thank you again! :) It was something of a focus point for the whole one-shot, haha, one of the first ideas we had.

Thank you so much for the lovely review - it was such a great surprise to get, and really too complimentary! :) Thank you again and good luck with your reviewing!

Aph xx


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